Thursday, 11 September 2014
W.A.L.T use varied sentences beginning and lengths
what I think I did well was describing
thing and objects.I think I need to do better is come up with better punctuation.
the smashed windows were not stable the smashed window
pieces were all over the grass the bleached weatherboard the wallpaper was ripped the roof was rotten mice running around. The door
scratched and rusty the air vents were shaking around.
The wind making noise the corners were filled with spiders and webs underneath the floorboards were spiders mice. Possums jumping from wall to wall there was no electricity.
Posted by Jonni at 11:42
Wednesday, 10 September 2014
‘’Bam’’ I heard hailstones smacking against the window The storm was raging and the puffy dark clouds spewed up lighting
as I walked downstairs,to turn on the light. The light immediately went off again, so i went back upstairs . I saw a man in the corner of my eye. He had purple lips a pale face and shivering legs .but it was all part of my imagination I heard raging wind whooshing as though it was growling at me. The watery roof was dripping like a shower I heard hailstone banging against the shed.
suddenly I heard puddles splashing . I looked out the window,
the trees looked like they were being swept away by the vicious wind. the storm was subsiding yae as I yelled happily .
Posted by Jonni at 09:49
Monday, 25 August 2014
I remember when miss Nicola took us to
monument hill I love the views in the hot sun
the shade trees waving around. the breeze' grass.The cars looked like little racing cars driving around.
The tree roots were spike. The rocks were Just laying their
the trees were old and mouldy. The fence was sturdy and the trucks logs looked like they were little twigs. The houses looked like they were for ants.
Posted by Jonni at 09:56