Monday, 25 August 2014

monument hill

I remember when miss Nicola took us to
monument hill I love the views in the hot sun
the shade trees waving around. the breeze' grass.The cars looked like little racing cars driving around.


The tree roots were spike. The rocks were Just laying their
the trees were old and mouldy. The fence was sturdy and the trucks logs looked like they were little twigs. The houses looked like they were for ants.



Friday, 1 August 2014

that was summer by Jonni

W.A.L.T; write like other Authors as our techers
what I think I did really well was with the cool sentence
what I think I need to do better next time is create more paragraphs.