Friday, 1 August 2014

that was summer by Jonni

W.A.L.T; write like other Authors as our techers
what I think I did really well was with the cool sentence
what I think I need to do better next time is create more paragraphs.


  1. Jonni that second slid looks scary that is high as for me to jump of and Jonni you should put adjectives in your writing and you should put who it is created by

  2. Hi Jonni you slide show is fantastic the sword fish is awesome. I like how put allot of effort in your work Keep the going you are doing very well.